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Summary: Needs a rewrite.
Review: This is a book with " way too much meat" in a sandwich bag.
It is informative but the paragraphs have so many descriptions of so many people it's hard to keep " who's who straight".And it was all written in the past tense with not much real action or suspense. ( You know what's going to happen..and after you figure out who's going to do the killing...why should one keep reading?) I would like to tell the author ...You have a very good story to tell... it should be read by more people....I know you are enthusiastic about the subject. Just slow down and go back and rewrite this book. I'm sure then you'll have a BEST SELLER. Tanya Radic
Rating:
Summary: Needs a rewrite.
Review: This is a book with " way too much meat" in a sandwich bag.
It is informative but the paragraphs have so many descriptions of so many people it's hard to keep " who's who straight". And it was all written in the past tense with not much real action or suspense. ( You know what's going to happen..and after you figure out who's going to do the killing...why should one keep reading?) I would like to tell the author ...You have a very good story to tell... it should be read by more people....I know you are enthusiastic about the subject. Just slow down and go back and rewrite this book. I'm sure then you'll have a BEST SELLER. Tanya Radic
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