OFFICE SLAVE

Rating:
Summary: Erotic, stylistic, enjoyable read!
Review: Of course the story is not believeable! Who cares? Is it hot? Yes! I found "Office Slave" to be a rousingly entertaining tale of an improbable situation. McKenna knows how to write erotica and it shows in this red-hot work. Don't pick it up expecting reality -- but read it if you want to be amused, aroused and entertained.

Rating:
Summary: Erotic, stylistic, enjoyable read!
Review: Of course the story is not believeable! Who cares? Is it hot? Yes! I found "Office Slave" to be a rousingly entertaining tale of an improbable situation. McKenna knows how to write erotica and it shows in this red-hot work. Don't pick it up expecting reality -- but read it if you want to be amused, aroused and entertained.

Rating:
Summary: Started hot but went down hill
Review: The opening chapter was one of the hottest things about this book, which starts ultra steamy but loses pace soon after, and becomes a bit ridiculous. I'm happy to suspend disbelief but even within that world, it just wasn't as passionate as it could be and the sexual descriptions became mechanical after a while. The thought of the entire factor being happy to have a new sexual slave as an incentive program does make you smile though...

Rating:
Summary: Interesting premise, but dull execution
Review: This book has quite an interesting premise - a woman is guilty of embezzling money from her company, and to avoid criminal prosecution, is forced to agree to be a sex slave for her boss. This entails doing anything her boss commands, for himself, his customers and his employees, for a period of 18 months or so.

Unfortunately I don't think the book develops this idea in an interesting way. Firstly the boss's requests are too excessive and obvious, and it is totally implausible that any conduct of this kind could exist in an office (e.g. imagine someone walking naked through an exposed cubicle, or masturbating in view of other colleagues). Secondly, the "sex favours-for-money" deal that he offers her to avoid prosecution is too poor to be believable - he is practically offering her prostitution rates. Thirdly the lead character is almost immediately shown to relish her new role as submissive sex slave - she displays negligible resistance, which I think greatly diminishes from any interest/excitement the story could have generated. She is constantly engaged in degrading acts, but these have little effect on the reader because it is clear that she enjoys them.