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Her Daughter's Eyes

Her Daughter's Eyes

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Rating: 4 stars
Summary: Sad.. sad
Review: After reading it, I lost my appetite to write a review. I was disturbed by the reality of our life. What's wrong with us adults..?

This is not so much about the pregnancy or the birth. 17-year-old Kate is secretly pregnant and her younger sister, Tyler, delivered the baby. That concludes early in the book. So does the half-mystery of "who's the father and why the secret". (I won't spoil)

But this is more about the events that happened and how the people involved responded to them, which eventually resulted in the sad mess. The girls' mother, Diedrie, succumbed to breast cancer two years ago. Their father, Davis, broken, couldn't stay in the house because he misses her so much. So most of the time the girls are left alone in the house, tending to themselves. Fear of total abandonment and potential repercussion made Kate decided to keep the baby a secret inspite of the health risks.

When the secret is uncovered, also quite early in the story, the rest of the book moves from one character to another - pondering about what each has overlooked, selfishly neglected, misunderstood, mistakenly acted, and the consequences of it all. Somehow it revolves around the dead Diedrie and her untimely death.

I hope we learn something from stories like this.

I have to say that Inclan's writing is almost extraordinary. Characters are developed well, nevermind how hopelessly pathetic but unfortunately realistic they are. She's able to present to us the deep thoughts, fragile emotions, and hidden subconsciousness of the characters. This kind of storytelling only books can deliver.

Rating: 5 stars
Summary: Great Book
Review: I love this book and reccommend to anyone...much liek go ask alice you can find anythign int his bok that may realte to someone you know...i oved it and it was passed to me by a friend i intend to do the same:)

Rating: 4 stars
Summary: Failing to see the big picture
Review: If there is any book that defines "lack of communication" this is it.

Reeling from his wife's death a year ago, a middle aged father (Davis) neglects his responsibilities to his very own teenaged girls in favor of accommodating the arms and needs of a new love, Hannah. Unfortunately, his unresolved grief, coupled with his sexual appetite, obstructs all common sense and basic observation skills. Choosing to spend most of his time (and nights) at Hannah's home, he basically has abandoned his own children for the needs of Hannah's young boys and her special interests.

He drops by his own house to do the minimum; some yard work, pay bills, and maybe share a hastily purchased pizza which must be gobbled quickly before "Hannah" reminds him they must rush off to pick up her boys from day care. His quick check that the house was still standing sufficed for quality time parenting and reassurance that the girls were "just fine."

Well, a closer look would have confirmed an extraordinarily different picture. The girls are deeply grieving for their mom, lonely, frightened and spending almost every night alone without their father. Physically, they manage to get by with the money he throws at them for food and necessities, but their world is crashing down on them. As children, they make decisions as children would; albeit unsupervised children. The eldest is pregnant and successfully concealing it from not only her father, but Hannah, (one experienced in pregnancy) her teachers and the father of the child, who just so happens to be the next door neighbor and father of the children she babysits.

Choosing to conceal the pregnancy AND birth, Kate has convinced her younger sister to assist her through it all. Together, they educate themselves with the birthing process and succeed to bring about Kate's new daughter in secret. It is inconceivable that the father ignored the many indicators that something was amiss.

Many adults were involved in these girl's lives, and all of them missed the obvious. This is a very sad, passionately told story. The concept of blame and punishment could produce another story, as one contemplates the legal and moral ramifications of the neglect the children suffered. While one may emotionally tangle with that issue, please don't fail to notice the poignant reflections of the pain, heartbreak and joy that the girls experience together upon the birth of the baby girl. When the dust clears, and everyone must take stock of the situation, it is quite clear that another innocent child has entered the "picture".

Rating: 4 stars
Summary: Her Daughter's Eyes
Review: Jessica Barksdale Inclan wrote an exquisite novel about reality situations and conflicts present in some teenage lives and families. Every time that one problem seems to be resolved, it is followed by another. Kate Phillips, only 17, finds herself pregnant and afraid to tell her father. With her mother falling victim of cancer, and her father always gone, she turns to her sister Tyler, only 15. When the baby is finally delivered by just the two of them, and no medical help, the conflicts begin to roll in. Kate and Tyler's secret is tucked away in a closet, a baby named Deirdre. When their secret is discovered, their lives and many others, are twisted into an emotional roller coaster. Their father has to fight to regain custody of his two daughters, and Baby Deirdre. Not only is Davis, the father, faced with problems of regaining his daughter, but also with grieving and responsibility. The problem of baby Deirdre's father also evolves. When the father is determined, lives change. Her Daughter's Eyes, is filled with life, death, love, pain, loneliness and happiness. There are conflicts in the novel dealing with teenage pregnancy, loss of a mother, and the battle to hold on to something loved. Her Daughter's Eyes is a book that was beautifully written with heartfelt and warming emotions, and still conveys the cold-hard truth. It is a book any teenager, or adult, could truly enjoy, and maybe, relate to.

Rating: 4 stars
Summary: Her Daughter's Eyes
Review: Jessica Barksdale Inclan wrote an exquisite novel about reality situations and conflicts present in some teenage lives and families. Every time that one problem seems to be resolved, it is followed by another. Kate Phillips, only 17, finds herself pregnant and afraid to tell her father. With her mother falling victim of cancer, and her father always gone, she turns to her sister Tyler, only 15. When the baby is finally delivered by just the two of them, and no medical help, the conflicts begin to roll in. Kate and Tyler's secret is tucked away in a closet, a baby named Deirdre. When their secret is discovered, their lives and many others, are twisted into an emotional roller coaster. Their father has to fight to regain custody of his two daughters, and Baby Deirdre. Not only is Davis, the father, faced with problems of regaining his daughter, but also with grieving and responsibility. The problem of baby Deirdre's father also evolves. When the father is determined, lives change. Her Daughter's Eyes, is filled with life, death, love, pain, loneliness and happiness. There are conflicts in the novel dealing with teenage pregnancy, loss of a mother, and the battle to hold on to something loved. Her Daughter's Eyes is a book that was beautifully written with heartfelt and warming emotions, and still conveys the cold-hard truth. It is a book any teenager, or adult, could truly enjoy, and maybe, relate to.

Rating: 3 stars
Summary: Didn't Quite Deliver
Review: Kate Phillips is one unfortunate 17-year old. She and her 15-year-old sister, Tyler, are basically left to fend for themselves since their mother has died of breast cancer and their father seems to be only interested in burying his grief by running to his girlfriend. As if this virtual abandonment wasn't enough, Kate is pregnant. She has decided that no one but her sister is to help her with her delivery, and thinks that by careful maneuvering, she can keep her father from knowing about the baby once it is born. Amazingly enough, no one seems to notice that Kate is pregnant-not her father, not her teachers, not her friends. Their luck seems to hold for a time since they manage to keep the baby a secret for a time even after it is born. Yet ultimately, Kate's family and everyone else involved with the baby must come to a painful reckoning about Kate's pregnancy, its underlying causes, and how to deal with its raw and uncertain aftermath.

Anyone who picks up "Her Daughter's Eyes" will be struck by it unusual and supremely thought-provoking plot line. With a multitude of teen pregnancy stories around, it is to the author's credit that she has found her own memorable take on the topic. Certainly, "Her Daughter's Eyes" does begin well. The first few chapters paint a skilled picture of Kate and Tyler's troubled hidden lives, and Inclan's juxtaposing of opposing details (like the girls relaxing over chocolate milkshakes and yet frantically memorizing a pregnancy guide from Goodwill) makes Kate and Tyler's "journey" one that readers must keep following.

Unfortunately, this can't-put-downable style does not stay for the rest of the novel. Once Kate's baby is discovered (and especially once the baby's father is involved), the plot line slows to a crawl. Inclan spends much of the middle and latter parts of the book in various characters' heads, and not everyone's thoughts make for chapters as masterful as those at the book's beginning. Basically, everyone's "inner dialogue" becomes repetitive and falsely flowery. Kate's thoughts understandably center on being with and being able to keep her baby, the baby's father's anguished state of mind makes for constant regrets that he's ruined his life, and Kate's father mourns endlessly for his wife and his mistakes. All of these thoughts are valid, and could be effectively included, but a capable novelist will make sure that character perspectives are included often enough to show personalities and feelings effectively...but not so often that many pages seem awfully similar to the last.

The ending of this book was also disappointing. After all of the complex problems plaguing Kate's family were discussed, I thought the ending should have been a thorough, thoughtful exploration of how Kate and her family's life changed and how Kate's life took a new direction. It wasn't...instead, after a too-long middle, the book rushed to a lukewarm, shamelessly cliche conclusion about how Kate was "stronger now."

The book has two strikes against it-repetive character revelations and a shockingly weak ending. But it still has its luminous moments, a unique plot idea, and a memorable beginning. It really deserves about 2.7 stars.

Rating: 5 stars
Summary: In her daughter's eyes
Review: Now that's a story... Though there are many teenage stories lining bookstore and library shelves, this one is different, both in plot and in language. Inclan's metaphors open up the lives of sisters, daughters, neighbors, friends, husbands and wives. The story that unfolds is tragic but all too true, with blame to be had by someone or everyone, but you're not often sure for on every page there is a feeling you've had, a thought you've thought or a hurt you can identify with, even if you can't condone it.

And there there is the biggest character in this book, the one who never says a line of dialogue or appears on the stage in real time. Deidrde, the mother, lover, gardener who took life and transplanted it wherever she went until cancer ravaged her once and then again, finally pulling her away from her workaholic husband and her two young daughters, one, the youngest, is taught to be strong and be a helper, another just hurts, watching as Deidre slips away. There are others who love her too, who stick their toes in her dirt, delight in her laugh. But when she's gone, the world seems all too silent and her house and her family fall apart, unraveling little by little until only one yank will destroy them.

Sleeping in the closet in a onsie from Goodwill is that yank, a baby with her mother's eyes.

Rating: 5 stars
Summary: Her Daughter's Eyes
Review: Only 17, Kate Phillips is pregnant with her 9-month-old baby. Tyler, her 15-year-old sister, is the only one who has found out so far. Kate's been hiding her baby from the start, wearing baggy jeans and oversized shirts and sweatshirts. Their mother, Deidre, died 2 years earlier from breast cancer. Their father, Davis, doesn't spend much time with his daughters; instead, he's with his girlfriend and her two sons 24/7, which made it easier for Kate and Tyler to hide the baby when born. Two weeks after Deidre's birth, the father, her next-door neighbor, Sanjay, and his wife, Meera, find out about the baby and take them (Kate, Tyler, and Deidre) to the hospital, where they later find social workers. Kate ends up giving up Deidre and being put in a foster home with her sister.

Kate was determined to have her baby and to keep her alive. She was scared to tell anyone about it, for if anyone knew, they might take her baby. Although she is only 17, she thought like an adult but made childish actions. She had an affair with her next-door neighbor, Sanjay, who was already married and had two young boys. In her eyes, nothing mattered except her baby. Nothing stopped her from having Deidre, although in the end, she had to give her up. She was strong and sad, but she knew it was the right thing to do.

Tyler wasn't sure what to do or say when her sister finally told her she was pregnant. She thought her sister was stupid and arrogant for not telling her before. Tyler, like her sister, was scared of hiding. Although their father never knew, they both didn't like the idea from hiding from Davis. Kate depended on Tyler; Tyler was the one who went out and bought Dr. Spock books, baby things, and birth pamphlets and videos. She was the only who Kate could count on. When she delivered Kate's baby, she was holding a new life in her hands. Tyler had brought life to the little child, the little miracle. Giving birth to Deidre is definitely my favorite part of this heart-warming novel...

Rating: 5 stars
Summary: A poignant tale
Review: Their mother Deidre recently died. Their father Davis ignores them as he spends his time working or at his girlfriend's house. Sixteen-year-old Kate is pregnant and only her younger sister Tyler helps her, just like the team they are when it comes to homework, cooking, and cleaning.

The two teens work to set up a home for the newborn. They are prepared with a makeshift crib, Goodwill clothing and other items, and even a Dr. Spock book. The duo finds it relatively easy to hide Kate's pregnancy from their father and though it is a bit more difficult to conceal it from school officials and friends, no one seems interested in either Kate or Tyler. However, what will happen once the child is born frightens both siblings.

HER DAUGHTER'S EYES is an incredible tale centering on a high school student having a child with no one but her younger sister to turn to for help. The story line is well written without accusations or preaching. The two intrepid, flawed, and apprehensive sisters are wonderful people who could be anyone's children or neighbors. This adds to the overall realism of a poignant look at a dysfunctional family and society. Jessica Barksdale Inclan has written a powerful tale that deserves wide reading.

Harriet Klausner

Rating: 5 stars
Summary: Oh, I loved this book!!!!!!!!!!!
Review: There is so much more to this book than I could possibly write in this review and oh, so very much to read in between the lines. This is such a "real and could be in your neighborhood" story. There is no exaggerated, descriptive writing and no unbelievable situations.
Some of this story....actually a lot of this story is sad and will almost rip your heart out. Kate and Tyler's mother died of breast cancer at the beginning of the girls' teen years, a difficult time to start with. The loneliness this causes them is heartbreaking. They miss their "normal" life tremendously. Their father, Davis, doesn't handle the loss of his wife very well at all. He finds a woman to fill that void in his life and basicly moves in with her, letting Kate and Tyler live alone in the house on the cul-de-sac in a well-to-do neighborhood with it's upper class residents. Davis feels that his daughters are old enough to take care of themselves with him stopping in a few times a week. 17 year old Kate also fills her void and loneliness the wrong way and ends up pregnant and scared and not sure where to turn. 15 year old Tyler takes on a lot of responsibility and is mature beyond her years. She cares for her sister, delivers a baby at home, and much more.
There is so much more to this story and this book would be one of the best discussion stories I've ever read.
I highly recommend reading this book. It is hard to put down and has such a wonderful easy to read flow. Oh, and there is some suspense here! Who is the father? Watch how all of the lives twist and change. A person's death or a person's birth can change so many lives in some of the strangest ways. Some good and some not so good.
I absolutrly LOVED this novel. Excellent writing. I like to read a book that I don't have to study to know who is who and what's going on. This one starts off great and keeps getting better. There are even little side twists that could turn out to be very good stories also. GREAT BOOK :-)


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