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Summary: Dr. Stone - please hire a proofreader or a ghost writer!!
Review: Although the content of this book is well worth anyone's time to read and ponder, I think it only fair to warn any would be purchasers that Dr. Stone is NOT a good writer. He may have brilliant ideas that he wishes to share with the world, but he has problems handling the simple requirements for formating a sentence (e.g., a verb and a noun!). This book desperately needs editing. I suspect this relatively unknown publisher was willing to produce the book "as is" based on the manuscript but did no proofreading. Consequently, in the first chapter alone, I had to cross out words to make sentences flow properly, I had to hook together dangling phrases to figure out what Dr. Stone was trying to say. I had to put in much more effort to read this book than any other book that has the modicum of literary standards that we all expect in a purchased volume. This is far different from Dr. Stone's earlier books which were published by Light Technology Publishing. Such books often had a joint author, and I am now seeing how important that is for Dr. Stone!If you are a fanatic for Dr. Stone's New Age vision, then by all means purchase the book, but be aware that if you love the English language and the rules of sentence construction that most of us learned by junior highschool, this book may be frustrating for you.
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